If the world was only better characters-katniss Everdeen from hunger games, and Penelope from the absolutely true Diary of a part time Indian!
It
was a cold bone chilling mourning and the sun was just peeking thru the
clouds. It was summertime in the small town Wendell MA. Yes I know
you're thinking well the last I knew it these characters were in 2
different parts of the world. Well let me tell you what happened to them
for them to be in this town! Katniss Everdeen was sick of this mess
that she was in so she just left. She left her mom she left Peeta she
left the capital she left her district. She let everyone she loved
down.”I will never forgive myself for this” Katniss knew she was being
selfish but she thought it was for the best. She knew that she should
have taken her family on this path to freedom but for some crazy reason
she didn't she just went, to deal with her life by herself. And the
worst part was that the capital will kill her district and family
because she is not there to scare them off. it was all a big real life
nightmare that will never go away. And i know i know your thinking why
did she leave? Well because the capital was unfair and said leave or we
will kill you.
Penelope
was in Reardan on a quiet evening folding laundry and watching TV with
her boy friend Arnold. When the phone started to ring and it was the
hospital calling to say her parents got into a horrible car crash and
that they died. She fell on her knees sobbing it was the worst pain that
she's ever felt. Arnold was their holding her telling her it was gonna
be OK and not to cry that they were gonna get throw it together. There
was nothing that was gonna make her feel better. a few hours later she
got a phone call from her grandmother. “Sweet heart of honey” her
grandmother said. “Oh come live with me honey you can go to Swift River
high”. “It will be OK honey”. “But grandma I can't just leave Arnold,
I’m everything to him!” there was a long pause and then Penelope said
hold on grandma. Than Penelope started talking to Arnold and she said “I
need to go I can't stay, either come with me or stay. “Oh I will
definitely come with you and support you” Arnold had said. Penelope was
so happy.
As
the two girls made their way into Wendell MA packing and what not, they
each a thought that came to their mind. (“Is this a good idea”). (“who
am I letting down”)? Well in each mind they were thinking-(“everyone”).
When Katniss arrived at her apartment it was right next to Penelope’s
grandmother’s house. One day when katniss walked outside to move her
bike out of the rain, she bumped into Penelope. They started talking and
that conversation went into an hour. Arnold came out looking for
Penelope, and saw them talking. He saw that Penelope was crying. “Why a
you crying”? He asked. “Because this girl” in hysterics now, “this girl
and her family it’s horrible”! “She lost her own sister”!! Arnold could
not believe it, that was the worst. Yeah he had it bad but not as bad as
katniss. And with a few more hours of talking they came up with a crazy
plan. They were going to somehow kill the capitals people. For making
young people go kill each other for their own enjoyment. And with a gift
in return for food. Katniss and Penelope and Arnold were on their way.
And yes I know your thinking well what about the grandmother? Well she
told Penelope that she should go and be back soon and that she loves
her. They were all so upset that people would do such a thing. It took
them about a week to get to the capital and they brought lots of weapons
to defend themselves with. When they got their they looked around and
they were careful not to be seen any ware. They were all looking for ways
in the capital, when finally Arnold found the back door to be loose. So
they all went throw and snuck into the clean empty hallways. Then they
came face to face with 3 guys but they took them out in about 4 min.
”‘well, well, well” the head of the capital said. His name was snow,
“looks like Katniss and her “brave” friends are here”. He said, “Hey”
Katniss said we just killed 3 of your men and now were about to take you
out. Than before they know it they saw snow shoot himself with a gun
tucked in his pocket! And after that all three of them exchanged looks.
1.I really liked you story josie! It was very good.
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3. For some reason it was hard for me to follow along in this story. I think its because I haven't read one of those books.
4. What I think you could do to make this essay even better is to maybe add so more detail to it and add and puncuation or grammer to it and fix the spelling of some words, like for example in the first sentence you wrote,"It was a cold bone chilling mourning and the sun was just peeking thru the clouds." the word (thru) would be (through). But other that that great job josie:)
thank you very much Lindsey! i was typing this on my lap top and did not realize that it needed to be charged so i was almost done with typing it, and than it crashed so i had to type it over again all in one night! it was awful and i was tired! ha ha
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